A photography discussion becomes more useful when a question is precise. Present enough context for other viewers to understand your intention and the choice you are trying to make.
Ask for feedback you can apply
For an image critique, state whether you want help with composition, colour, a sequence or a technical issue. Describe the intended output and include relevant settings when they explain the problem. Avoid making equipment the only context for the picture.
When giving feedback, separate observation from preference: describe what you see, explain its effect, and offer a possible experiment. This gives the photographer a practical way to evaluate the suggestion.